The Third Picture Book of the year – Farmer Falgu

 

I had always wanted to write a funny journey book. I tried various times and it was never right.

And then while researching Indian publishers, I came across Karadi Tales. I know Karadi Tales from a long time ago. They are based in my home-town Chennai (I should say City – but home-city doesn’t have the same feeling of reminiscence.)

I know they were big on audio and I was delighted to find out that they are now publishing picture books too.

So I decided my journey book would be an Indian story and the characters in the story, uniquely Indian, folksy even.

I wrote about a farmer who sets off and meets different people. In  my first draft, I setup a problem for the farmer – but didn’t really solve his problem. But well like all writers, I thought it worked. I sent it to the editor at Karadi Tales.

In a few weeks, the editor came back. She said we liked the story; but…

Ugh! Here we go, I thought.

The rest of her email actually told me what she felt was wrong with the script and offered to review a revision.

Ha! That’s better, I thought. See, editing I can do. I can revise something to death. Once I get a hint I am very good at solving the puzzle. Most of the time I suffer from near-sightedness – I can’t really see what’s wrong.

 

I set off towards the revision. The first thing I did, was to work out the ending, which the editor said wasn’t satisfying. I had an idea – long ago I had written a poem (that went unpublished) on the silence of nature and listening with eyes. I gelled that with the story and I thought I had a good ending now.

But then I thought I would use this opportunity to do some more revisions. I cut the words and introduced sounds of the farm. Then I introduced in-line rhymes. I checked the rhythm one more time and cut some more.

I worked on it for 3 days – making changes here and there. And finally sent it out again and set off on my holiday in 8 months to Scotland.

The good thing is my day job is so busy and I am usually working on so many projects that I forget what I’ve submitted in a conscious way. Although I hold all my submission entries in my head. I exactly know who is yet to reply.

A week and half later, I was in bed, with a bad cold and fever. I heard a ping on the phone in the afternoon. Without looking at the phone, I knew it was the editor. Not sure why – it could be the time – because all my spam is focused before 11 am and after 10 pm. And in India it was end of the day. When editors tackle unsolicited manuscripts worldwide.

I didn’t check the email for another few hours even though the phone was right next to me. I was that ill.

Then I checked and I rejoiced. Yes we like it and can we publish it as a picture book.

Of course, you can! I was happy about so many things – it showed me the power of targeted submission. It showed me how market research and knowing the publisher and their alignment would help pitch the right story.

Well, hopefully this book too will be out next year and will do well.

What’s next then?

This Year’s Picture Books – The Second One – The Clever Camel

Here is the story of the second book. Couple of years ago, I asked a friend to give me a writing prompt. He said – Camel, folktale.

Camel and a folktale – that meant I have to retell a camel story. So I scoured around for a camel story. Predictably camels are not part of the Panchatantra  and I found many from the middle-east. I wrote a retelling of a camel story as a writing exercise.

I met some writers a few years ago in a writing workshop in Oregon. We kept in touch and we still do. One of them recommended a small publisher Guardian Angel Publishing. They produce beautiful books with diverse themes as a Print on Demand publisher. The book gets sold in Amazon. I did two books with them – an e-book and then a POD.

The e-book was published under their Littlest Angel series – Chasing a Pot of Gold

Then I placed a creative non-fiction – As I Watch – the story of a butterfly. Samantha Bell illustrated it and it is sold on Amazon. 

Earlier this summer, I decided to look up all the writing practice I had done to salvage some stories that had potential. I opened the camel story. I thought that would be great for GuardianAngel Publishing. So I sent a draft to the editor who promptly replied. She wanted some revisions on the scenes. I cut down some more words, added a few more scenes and there the story was accepted the next day. How often do you get to do that?

The Clever Camel is now contracted. I am expecting it to be out next year too. Next year will be a busy year for new books, I think. But I am not complaining.

A red umbrella, followed by a clever camel. It is not often that I get two acceptances within the first 6 months of the year.

This Year’s Picture Books – The First One -Ramu’s Red Umbrella

If you are friends with me on facebook or follow me on Twitter or hang-out with me on Google, you will know that I have placed three picture books this year. They are all with independent publishers who have a niche and are extremely passionate about what they do.

The first picture book of the year was with Pratham Books, based in Bangalore, India. Their mission is

At Pratham Books, we believe that every child has the right to enjoy good books.  And we believe they should have stories set in surroundings familiar to them and in a language close to their culture. We believe that to make books accessible to every child, the price points have to be very low. Pratham Books is a brand of story books as Indian as the children who read them. As a not-for-profit publisher, our dream is to see a country where every child wants to read, is able to read, and has something good to read.

I emailed the editors a couple of times to understand what they were looking for. An idea about an umbrella and the monsoon had been in head for so long. I also wanted many Indian characters in the story. That’s how Ramu’s Red Umbrella was born. I had to find a simple Indian boy’s name and I used my Dad’s nickname. His official name is very long – but his parents and siblings call him Ramu. This book was intended as a tribute to my Dad who has been proud of my writing ever since I started.

Pratham Books were not on a reading schedule, but when they saw Ramu’s story, they loved it. The editor said I got 4/5 in their editorial meeting. What that 4 means, I am not sure. But I am glad I got it.

The brilliant thing is – this book will be published in several Indian languages and will be in the hands of thousands of kids. I can’t wait.

 

Comic Books – Is it serious reading?

I was a child of Amar Chitra Katha – Chitra meaning pictures –  just a coincidence with my name that refers to a star I was born under.

The company that produced Amar Chitra Katha – literally meaning Immortal picture stories – that’s what they were to me.

I read a lot of picture books, story books, even English text books and Readers Digest even when I was 6 or 7. But the books that fed my voracious appetite were the big bound volumes of the comic series ACK.
ACK told mythology stories, stories from India’s culture, history and legends. Every Indian mythology and classics I know today is from these – it was simplified, adapted and there were pictures to guide me. I learnt about heroes, warriors, kings and comedians. I learnt about the history of our fight for freedom.

I did read a lot of western comics too – Archie, Tintin and Asterix. Sounded foreign to have boyfriends, travelling across the world. But it opened up the world to me. I did read a lot of Enid Blyton too and recent figures shows Indian kids still read a lot of Enid Blyton. I learnt about muffins, coves, tides and caves from Famous Five series and my love for detective stories came from the Secret Seven and Nancy Drew series.

In my family, reading was revered.

Somehow  my parents assumed that I was out of trouble because I had a found a secret corner in the house and I had a stack of books next to me, reading. But they didn’t know how it fed my imaginations. I was always in trouble in my head. I was one of the Famous Five or the Secret Seven.

Reading was considered not only safe, but also crucial. Why don’t you read a book? Was my mum’s standard response to “I’m bored.” In a way I think I overdid it –because I lost interest in sports and I regret that still. But on the other hand, at least I developed the love for stories that made me write.

My first manifestation of being a writer was going up to the school assembly of 500 kids and telling a story. I didn’t have a script. All I did was decide on the story with my aunt. I told her the story in my own words and that’s it. I walked up without a paper. Dumb courage. I narrated the story in English – which to this day I can’t decide if it is my first language or second. I didn’t think it was strange for a seven-year old to tell a story to a school full of kids in a second tongue. Well, I still cherish the first prize I won – it was a Enid Blyton picture book.

That’s perhaps another reason for reading when I grew up – schools always gave books as prizes. And in a country where English books were expensive to buy, I cherished every book I received and still have them all.

I digress – lets come back to comic books. Amar Chitra Katha, Tinkle and so many more still do the rounds in India. Now they have a modern format, come in electronic form and have been turned into animation series for both Indian and foreign TV companies.

I used to go to a lending library in town, that had 10s of racks of bound volumes of the comic books. Each book had about 20 issues in them. And I would 10 of those bound volumes for each fortnight and come back to read them after school.

These books taught me characterisation, dialogue and pace. The comic strips encouraged reading box by box – no wonder I am more interested in 12 spreads than a 60,000 word novels still.

Anant Pai the creator of ACK sadly passed away last year. But his spirit lives on as the company is now owned by a private investor. The kids who are now parents and today’s kids still love reading these comics is a testament to a man who had vision and  courage.

Do you read comic books now? Did you read them as a child? Do you let your kids read comics?
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Finding Agents

I’ve been in the UK for two years now. Even though I have not spent all the 24 months looking for an agent, I did try very hard.

With 17 titles in print and a bag full of new stories, I’ve been sending letters to agents in Britain. In fact, some of them very kind to read it fully and recommend me to other agents. But most have returned it with a standard note.

Research the agent, look at their websites, look at their authors’ websites, google the agents, prepare a killer one-page letter, send the best manuscript, send resume and business-card – even then the road to being taken on is quite a slippery slope.

One day I will climb up and find an agent and that day, this post will be sure deleted. The count starts now.

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